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507BJ分手场景(慎入 重点更新在第二页 lovehydeken亲情翻译在第三页)
自从看了预告片那个拥抱之后我一直对507有强烈的好奇心，现在我终于自食恶果了，这个剧情介绍太可怕了（如果不小心进来心脏脆弱的亲请别往下看吧 泪）
第二页有BM fight scene 更新 应该是J走了后跟B的第一次见面 我觉得比这幕更痛苦 亲们如果看的话自备手帕
英文不太好的亲们注意了 第三页有lovehydeken不辞劳苦的翻译 实在太感谢了 后面几页可能还会有翻译矫正和讨论 enjoy!!
原文地址：http://groups.yahoo.com/group/QA ... /62318?viscount=-30
作者Mark
I've been fortunate enough to be able to view the 507 break up scene.
Here is a recap, and unfortunately I am unable to post the clip to
the file.
Let me just say, Gale and Randy's performances in this scene are Emmy
worthy.
Scene begins with a close up of the big window in Brian's loft. It is
dark out, probably the early hours of the morning. You can see the
some of the buildings lit in the distance
There is a brief snippit of music. Whether it has lapped over from
the previous scene or not... can't tell, because I have seen on only
this particular segment....not the scene before or the one after.
The music swells a bit then fades. It does not sound like background
music but rather like it was coming from a radio or TV.
It is definitely the last few bars of a John Williams movie theme. At
first I thought it was Star Wars, but in reflecting, I am pretty sure
it is from the main theme of the original Superman movie.
Camera scans past the window and then.....
Close up of Justin lying back in the big white sectional couch. He
has his hands folded on his stomach with a faraway and contemplative
look on his face.
We see his head, shoulders and part of his torso. His head is
resting in the couch pillow and his shoulders and torso are flat in
the couch. He is nervously interlocking and releasing his fingers
Cut to loft door sliding open
Brian enters, looks at Justin and proceeds to the kitchen
Camera shot of Justin. He is lying completely horizontal. Upper body
flat on the cushion of the couch his legs a stretched out and feet on
the coffee table. While his body is perfectly still but he is
fidgeting his still clasped fingers.
Shot back to Brian headed the refrigerator, he glances and smiles
again at Justin
Close up of Justin. Slight flicker of a smile of greeting. He is
starting to crack his knuckles
He looks at Brian and suddenly the shot of Brian goes black and
white. Then he is wearing a tee-shirt instead of the dark silky
button shirt he was wearing at the beginning of the scene. Then he
pulls his tee shirt off and is shirtless with the open water bottle
in his hand . Then he is pouring the water over his head and bare
chest. Close up of Brian's face shaking his head and shaking off the
water. This is actually Justin visualizing that scene from 501 when
Brian brought him to the loft.
Back to color and the present. Brian is dressed as he was at the
beginning of the scene. He finally speaks. He is just opening the
bottle now.
B: The club was packed tonight
J: (slight monotone, as he sits up and stifles a slight yawn): mmmmm.
That's nice. (he stretches his arms in front of him)
B: Line was all the way around the block
J: (sitting up now. Takes a quick breath) Great
B: Hardly any room on the dance floor
J:. Whatever happens, by all means, keep on dancing. (a tinge of
sarcasm? Just a tinge. Mostly there is weariness to his voice)
B: (Looks at him as he fiddles with the cap on the bottle. Slightly
flip tone. Not unkind, though) What about you, dear? How was your
evening? (he gives Justin a little smile. Almost the smile of a
little kid)
J. (stands) Not *nearly* as exciting as yours (again, weary monotone,
until this next part, which is said more evenly and firmly but still
in a quiet tone). I spent it here...alone...thinking. (he approaches
Brian who is standing behind the counter.Flicker of a smile from
Justin) And don't say `always a dangerous sign'."
Brian runs his index finger and thumb across his pursed lips,
miming: "My lips are sealed."
Justin leans his back against one of the steel columns. They are
about a foot apart. The tone of the conversation is quiet, straight
forward, but not hostile
J: I made some decisions
B: (unpurses his lips) `bout what
J: My life
B: Ah!
J What I want
B: (he approaches J and is right next to him) I thought you had that
all worked out. You're going to live of your conSID-er-able
Hollywood wealth and try your hand at being an artist. (flicker of a
smile. He's trying to make a joke. He knows something is coming)
J: (very serious now and a tad irritated) Why are you making fun of
me?
B: (a bit taken aback) I'M not making fun.
(Justin looks at him with a slight raising of eyebrows. The message
is: "then what DO you mean?")
B: You're making me f**king nervous as hell (and his nervousness is
evident in his voice and face) (a loud out-take of breath is heard
from Justin) Just tell me what you want, what you decided..and we can
go to bed..and f**k.
J: (slight laugh and smile and shaking of his head). You already know
what I want. I already told you.
B: (His facial expression: `so THIS is what it's all about'. He
starts to turn away. Then he laughs) That's right. A husband (lapses
into Brianesque sarcastic tone) A family. A home (he draws this word
out: Whooome). EV-er-ything that makes life worth living.
J (not loud, but forceful) Would you F**King cut it out? (quietly)
Just *stop* it. (When he says "stop" you can hear what sounds like
him slapping the counter with the palm of his hand)
B is surprised by the strength of Justin's words and tone. He says
nothing.
J (sighs) And I KNOW you can't give me those things
B: "Not can't. `Can't' denotes that I'm incapable. It's that I won't.
J:I accept that. I suppose that is one of the the reasons I've always
loved you.
Brian (turns away) Oh. The un-tame-able beast.
J: (very reasonably, resolutely and calmly) But to be a couple both
people need to want the same things. Move in the same direction. But
if they can't... or ..won't (a bit of emotion creeps into his voice
for a second ) they really have no other place to go.
B: (Stares at him a minute. Blinks) Probably not.
J: Then why are we still doing this if we know it's never going to
work?
Closeup on Brian. He says nothing for about 5 seconds then for softly
says:
B: Damned if I know
J stares at him for another few seconds then turns and walks out of
the frame. Cut to Brian who takes a drink of water. He watches J as
he walks over toward the bedroom and picks up his leather jacket
which is on the step or riser leading to the bed. He puts it on, then
reaches behind the partition and pulls out his big duffel bag which
is packed and hoists it over his shoulder..Then he picks up his back
back and heads towards the door
Close-up on Brian who now understands Justin is leaving.
Full-length long shot of the two of them standing in the middle of
the room with the door behind them
Justin drops the bags. Brian looks down at them for a few seconds
Justin then reaches up with one hand and places it on B's shoulder
and then puts his hand on Brian's neck and pulls himself toward
Brian, standing on his toes slightly. He then puts his other arm
around Brian and pulls him into a hug.
Brian stands there with both arms awkwardly at his side and then
embraces Justin
They hug tenderly
Individual over-the-shoulder shots of both their faces nuzzling on
each other's necks.
B: Where will you go?
J: I'll think of something
They release each other and J moves to the door
Close up of Brian. He is clenching his jaw. Sadness but also
reflection, contemplation in his eyes. He is thinking, taking it all
in
He turns toward the door.
B: Let me know.
J is in the door way and he stares at Brian sadly and pulls the door
shut
close-up on Brian. He turns from the door and stares away
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