本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-23 22:10 编辑

he is all right

不知从什么时候起,灰蒙蒙的天空中聚集了成片厚重的积雨云,道道闪电仿佛天神的利戟般划破苍穹,隆隆作响的惊天响雷好似撒旦自地狱传来的怒吼。N.Y.City外围一个小型公共墓地,在这个普通的上班日的中午,本应是一派庄严肃穆的幽静,此刻,却在风雨雷电的倾情伴奏下,上演着一幕疯狂的死神真人秀。

Scene:somebody's tombstone
      
Brian此刻跪在草地上,低垂着头,委靡得不住摇晃,原本美丽的脸庞布满青紫,身上破乱的衣衫晕染着片片暗红。

舔了舔有些干裂的嘴唇,Brian勉强打起精神,调动身体全部能量让大脑高速运转,整理思绪思考着刚刚到底发生了什么:原本还在阴冷的地下室绝望得等待Dylan Cooper(魔鬼终究还是满足了“祭品”要“死个明白”的愿望,告诉了Brian自己是谁)扣动扳机结束这梦魇般的一切,不知为何,已经抵着他额头的枪口被移开了,接着自己就被Dylan Cooper那个混蛋五花大绑地从地下室拖拽出来,一头扔进雪佛兰的后排座,毫无疑问,那人不是良心发现送他回家,随着车子启动的震颤,早已透支的体力再也无力支撑,终于放任意识陷入一片混沌......不知过了多久,他疲惫地眨了眨眼却无力睁开,依稀感到一个平稳得让人安心的车速,几乎可以肯定那疯狂的家伙是个模范司机。约莫又过了十分钟,车门被打开,他——Brian Kinney就是现在这幅鬼样子。

Dylan Cooper(凝视墓碑,自言自语):hey~Bryan  my little brother,how are you?
Brian缓慢抬起头,也看向墓碑,惊讶着眼睛张大了些。墓碑上主人的名字——BRYAN COOPER。
Dylan Cooper(没有回头理会跪在一旁的Brian,情绪平静地继续自说自话):you should appreciate your name,Brian...because of it, you are still alive now.

Brian没空理会Dylan Cooper这个变态疯子的废话,观察着四周的环境,试图找机会逃脱。
Dylan Cooper扭头看了一下沉默的Brian,暴戾地走过去一把抓住Brian的头发。

Brian(痛苦地):damn it!  
Dylan Cooper(面部痉挛地跳动着,嘲讽的语气):hoho~~no,no,no,Brian...calm down,calm down,it's not like you...
Brian(冷静下来,狠狠地带着明显的挑衅):you don't know me at all . son of bitch!
Dylan Cooper(突然疯狂地大笑,猛地用枪口正对着Brian的额头,失控地咆哮):yeah...but I just know that you killed my twin- brother!you're the fucking selfish fags! Zac Hanson,he once was Bryan's lover.But the scum had abandoned him mercilessly after teasing him.shit! because of you, the fucking nasty arrogant queers,Bryan,my only little brother had a suicide two months ago!...Zan Hanson,Henry Moore,Richard
Jefferson,Tony Chan,Burack Duncan...certainly and you——Brian Kinney,you should go to hell!
Brian(听罢,知道这次自己在劫难逃,豁出去地调侃):it's you~that serial killer~I am so lucky,ha?
Dylan Cooper(目露凶光,稳了稳手中的枪,紧盯着Brian的脸):...it's time to say goodbye Brian——
... ...

倾盆的大雨从天而降,瞬间为整个墓地笼上一层水雾,豆大的雨滴沉重地敲打着万物。血,鲜红鲜红的,被冲刷着一路蜿蜒前行,渐渐隐没在一片青草当中......

Flack(穿着防弹背心,保持着射击的姿势,伫立在雨中,松口气,对身边的人下命令):come on guys,go and check.
Flack(走到一边,拿出手机,拨了通电话):hey,Mac~
Mac(听不出情绪地问):how is it going?
Flack(简单地汇报了一下):your guess is right.we found them here.
Mac(似乎有点担忧):... how are they now?
Flack:Dylan Cooper is dead and Brian Kinney is injured.(望着不远处正在忙碌的同事)we are checking the scene.
Mac(松了口气):well done,Dan.We'll be right there soon.


scene:crimal scene investingation lab
        in Mac's office

Mac dialed Justin's number.
Mac(听到电话那头传来了Justin声音):Brian——he is all right.


TO BE CONTINUED...
1

评分人数

  • cora

life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

TOP

44# 季雨清
呵呵真的觉得到了英语版块
发现这样不错哎,不管是对看的人还是写的人英语都有帮助

I'm looking forword your next chapter too!
Time Goes By 。

TOP

hi~ I am coming for the next chapters, LZ,you must hurry up!!!:s02make haste!! :s34quickly!! I'm looking forword your next chapter!!:s13

TOP

啊哦~~~
全部英文對白...郁悶ing~~~~
以小的的絕對不及格的英文水平
悲哀ing......
還好有方塊字
讓我基本能看明白個所以然

TOP

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-20 23:09 编辑

41# cora
坦白说,我写BJ文的目的之一就是练习英文{:3_213:} 我喜欢寓教于乐,呵~

论坛里很多cora翻译的文,版主英文水平应该是顶呱呱的吧,今后请多指教喽 :-)
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

TOP

彻底变成英语频道……{:3_269:}

,I was so panic

Panic,喜欢这个词和他这种心态,怕失去

TOP

好火热啊~~看的俺脸红心跳的~~俺琢磨着B大叔这么有料~~他们做的时候应该还要更火热~~,嘿嘿
自由自在·无拘无束

TOP

占沙发...~
先看到的是成片的英语,看下来以后觉得BJ的独白很煽情{:3_149:}
Brian,I'v been waiting for you just like every time...please remember...remember it forever...
please forgive me if I left you alone...because I don't really wanna say goodbye to you...

一个说永远另一个说再见
让我预感不是很好{:3_199:}
Time Goes By 。

TOP

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-20 21:22 编辑

Monologue

Justin's voice:I have never thought of a life without the man called

Brian Kinney since my 17-year-old spring.He once said to me"I won't

let you go anyway."I have been trusting him so much.Absolutely he is a

hero in my heart although I haven't told him before.This time I choose

it as usual,because he fucking is Brian Kinney! And he won't lie to

me,never...If we couldn't be together with each other any longer,lives would make

no sense...Brian,I'v been waiting for you just like every time...please

remember...remember it forever...

Brian's voice:I have never imagined that one day I am unwilling to

leave somebody so much.when I realized an endless separation from

you,I was so panic as to want to beg that crazy freak at one moment even.

fuck!I am Brian Kinney!I can handle all the things at any time.But——it seems

to be an accident,doesn't it?...Justin,my dear sunshine, please forgive me

if I should leave you alone...because I don't really wanna say goodbye to you...


TO BE CONTINUED...
1

评分人数

  • cora

life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

TOP

期待后续。。。。。。

TOP

几天没看B大就被虐成这样了{:3_149:}
这算是黎明前的黑暗吗
Time Goes By 。

TOP

34# cora
坚固的感情需要考验嘛~:s46   
   
再说David也是个不错的人耶~~~特殊时刻他在J身边总比J一个人面对好吧:s38
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

TOP

你很善良地让Brian被嫌疑犯掳走,然后又在脆弱的Justin身边安插一个无微不至的David{:3_213:}

TOP

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-24 22:53 编辑

he probably is the next one

scene:the crime scene investigation lab
          Mac's office

A call from Flack was being answered by Mac.

telephone(Flack's voice):Zac Hanson's agent came here half an hour ago.
Mac(对整个案件了如指掌地迅速反应):Grace Lee
telephone(Flack's voice卖关子道):yeah...she brought some interesting things.
Mac(拿出boss的架势):come on Flack,I hate wasting my time you know.so the main point is——
telephone(Flack's voice正经了点):aha~Grace Lee gave me some DVD produced by Zac Hanson when he was alive.the content of these are very speical... they're all about himself...and some his "friend"
Mac(似乎意识到案件有了某种转机):so——I guess you should've got his friend's name,right?
telephone(Flack's voice在电话那头闷闷地笑了笑):you're a real boss,Mac...Dylan Cooper, an employee of PBNA.
Mac(回忆着陈述):the latest victim,Henry Moore was a middle-level manager in PBNA.
... ...

scene:the crime scene investigation lab

Stella盯着闪动着”no match“的电脑屏幕,眉头紧锁,思考着指纹比对的结果。

Stella(自言自语):there is no match sample in the database...it means the person has never a crime before...

Danny敲敲门,看Stella没回应,便自己推门进来。

Danny(双手环胸,煞有介事地搭话):maybe you can keep a wait several minutes.
Stella(机械性地应着):why...(猛然回神,惊奇地看着Danny)what time did you come in?
Danny(笑着,卖关子地开着玩笑):hoho~that's a secret.
Stella(不计较地笑笑):so——what did you mean just now?
Danny(正色道):we noticed a guy when Flack and I surveyed the tattoo. a tattoo studio's owner recognized the tattoo——Bryan.he said that Zac Hanson and his a friend had come and called for it about two years ago. he could still remember it because of a special position. we've got a favor from him to do a figure sketch(*人物素描).

the telephone was ringing suddenly.Danny picked it up and listined to a report from Flack.

a few seconds later...

Danny(一边挂上电话,一面看向Stella):Dylan Cooper. come on Stella.try to find out if there is a match with him.
Stella(熟练地操作电脑):right.

... ...

scene:a dark basement

一个中等身材,看似平凡无奇,甚至此刻阴狠的眼神中仍可寻着一丝羞怯的瘦弱男人,拿着枪,在昏暗的灯光下,俯视着Brian.

the strange man(泄愤似的用力踹了一脚Brian):you are all same. son of bitch faggot! Don't look at me by your damn eyes!
Brian(一时岔气地猛咳嗽,吃痛地):fuck you!
the strange man(一把抓起Brian的头发,强迫他看着自己,疯了似的):you really want to know who I am ,ha?
Brian(神经质地笑笑,有气无力却很清晰地说着):I have already known... who you are... a pathetic,stupid freak.
男人狠狠地给了已经遍体鳞伤的Brian一个耳光,响亮得传遍整个地下室。
the strange man(咬牙切齿地喘息,举着枪,情绪不稳定,语无伦次地):shit!you're all self-righteous and arrogant...you are all good at laughing at some other people and  get a plenty of fun from it!
Brian(不怕死地摆出一副老师的样子):although I have no idea who you are talking about...I can give you the reason.
the strange man(扭曲地嘲笑):aha?...go ahead
Brian(带着自负的虚弱笑容抬抬头,勉强对视着疯子):because we are strong ,not like you...we are always beautiful,hot and successful.but... you are a poor guy...only hide yourself into a darkness .
the strange man(异常冷静地看着毫无畏惧的Brian,变态地笑着,把玩着手中的枪):I had thought Henry Moore was my final target...but——when I met you being togeter with him in sunny bar,I changed my mind.you should go to hell much more.
Brian强烈地感到危险正在一步步向自己逼近,沉默着,等待着接下来的将要发生的事情。
Brian(自嘲地笑笑,如有所思地开口):yeah,yeah,I guess so...but——I want to leave some words before I die.
... ...

scene:Justin's apartment

David两个小时前接到Justin的电话之后,感到情况紧急,立即联系取消了原定今天为筹备Justin在国家艺术协会支持下的全国巡展的预备会议,确保无后顾之忧后马不停蹄地驱车到Justin位于皇后区的高级公寓一看究竟。
一进门就看到倒在床边的Justin,David立刻冲过去抱起虚弱的Justin。

David(拍着Justin毫无血色的脸颊,急切得唤着):Jusitn!...Justin!
Justin(缓缓睁开了涩涩的眼睛,含糊不清地):David?...why are you be here?
David(半架着Justin把他放到了床上躺好): what happened?Taylor.
Justin皱皱眉,刚想开口跟David说明,电话响了。
Justin(精神欠佳地幽幽开口):hello
Mac(有点担心):...Justin? how is your voice?
Justin(顿时变得激动万分):Mac,you'v found Brian?
Mac(实事求是地回答):not yet,but we have proved he is not the murderer.
Justin(稍稍松口气,如释重负般):oh~~thanks god,you've made it clear.
Mac(打断Justin短暂的喜悦,略带沉重):Justin...first,I hope you have a psychological preparation ...
Justin(有点犹豫,紧紧握住David的手,神情严肃):...
Mac(知道Justin此时的心情,不等他回答,便接着):Brian may be abducted by the real murderer ...and... he probably is the next one.

听了Mac的话Justin只觉全身一阵麻痹,失语般,用清澈依旧的双眸盯着身边的David,求救似的甚是可怜,无意识地眨了眨眼,晶莹的泪水一路亲吻着他美丽柔和的脸颊滑落下来......


TO BE CONTINUED ...


PS:这篇没有写具体的时间,因为感觉如此紧凑的情节,肯定都是短时间内并发的,只要交代各路人马的动向就ok。不知这样大家觉得如何?还有——再次抱歉,让Brian陷入更深的危机:s37 至于小J,我已经很手下留情地不着重描写他遭受打击的样子了~~~呜~~~而且善良的让David去陪他。:s12
1

评分人数

  • cora

life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

TOP

喔喔~~ 居然这样虐Brian啊~~ lz写的好好啊~希望赶快更新,好想知道后续发展!
小J不要心疼哦,虐着虐着也就习惯了哈~:s12嘿嘿!

TOP

30# cora
就让他舍身取义,为人民服务一回吧~也算对他以往尖酸刻薄的小小惩戒吧:s04
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

TOP

心疼你就不要折磨Brian嘛{:3_265:}

TOP

:s37,天哪,这么虐B大呀!

TOP

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-14 23:20 编辑

who fucking are you?!

scene:Justin's apartment  4:20 A.M.
Justin dialed Brian's number again.The call remained without an answer from him.
彻夜未眠的Justin,精神有些萎顿,抓着电话,有些焦躁地从床上爬起来,光着脚踩在地板上,踱来踱去。

Justin(再次按下那个该死的号码,并烦乱地搔弄着因整夜辗转难眠而凌乱的头发,咒骂):shit! ...what the fuck are you doing there?Brian...come on, pick it up.

就在这时,他的手机响了起来,Justin精神一振,立刻拿起来,按下通话键。

Justin(担忧地责怪):Damn Brian! where are you?I have been calling you!
Mac:...Justin?
Justin(脸上闪过一丝失望,之后焦急地连珠炮似的自顾自说起来):Uncle Mac,thanks god ! I need you to give me a favor... I am a little worried about Brian after hearing your words... actually he has been out for several hours from last night.He has never been like this before.I mean... stay outside all night even without a call——
Mac(打断Justin接下来急于详述的话):hey,Justin——now you have to listen to me carefully ,ok?and keep yourself calm as possible as you can ...no matter what you will hear later.
Justin(一种不祥的预感逐渐在心头升腾,犹豫着开口):what's wrong with Brian?
Mac(耐心地陈述着案件):A man called Henry Moore was found dead half and an hour ago.
Justin(疑惑地):so?
Mac(顿了一下,接着):a witness saw Henry Moore being with a man at the backstreet corner outside the Sunny bar last night. ...the man is—— Brian.
Justin(瞬间僵住,不可思议地瞪大了布满血丝的眸子,胸口一阵憋闷,眩晕着尽量压抑着愤怒,像在听笑话):no,shit,it's so ridiculous...whatever I am just fucking caring about where Brian is now.
Mac(实事求是地):...we are  searching for him.
Justin(泄了气的皮球般,无力地坐在床沿):oh,no...


scene:crime scene investingation lab     4:25 A.M.  
      
Stella将提取的指纹通过扫描仪上传至电脑,通过网络在联邦中心信息库里查找着匹配的嫌疑人。

Adm(推门进来,拿着装有从Henry Moore被害现场提取的一个钱包的证物袋):hey,Stella,got some match?
Stella(无奈地举起双手,摇摇头):aha...I hope so,but——
Adm(可爱地笑笑,有点庆幸):fortunately, at least one of us have a good luck.
Stella(赞赏地看看Adm,开玩笑道):yes,so? would you please show me your good luck?
Adm(笑容可掬,麻利地拿出证物袋和检验报告):aha~sure...I checked the wallet which had been brought from the crime scene of Henry Moore's case.It belongs to a man named Brian Kinney.He has an highly reputable advertising agency in  Pittsburgh and he came to N.Y. two months ago.
Stella(接过Adm的介绍说下去):elite,ha?so—— he may be the suspect who we have been looking for?
Adm(有备而来地迅速提出异议): not exactly
Stella对于同伴模棱两可的解释不置可否,一头雾水。
Adm(赶忙解释):uh...I mean he also may be the next victim immediately...because... the blood on this wallet is his...and the most important thing is (表情严峻)——he's a gay.


at the same time
scene:a dark basement     

锈蚀的管道,潮湿的水泥地面,靠近顶端那孤零零摇曳出一隅不安分的昏暗的灯泡,以及——若有似无的腥臭味,一切都透露出某种病态的和谐,让人不寒而栗。
Brian被绑在那片仅有的昏暗中的一把椅子上,无生气地低垂着头 ,似乎晕了过去。破败的衣衫没了往日的光鲜,被虐打的伤痕面目狰狞地尽情展示着自己的可怖。此刻,一抹瘦削的身影从黑暗中慢慢走出,靠近奄奄一息的Brian,手中的枪在仅有的微弱灯光下,折射出阴狠的冷光。

嘀嗒,嘀嗒......滴水的声音在凝滞的空间里,清晰得好似已经开启的死亡预告。Brian从昏迷中醒来,微微睁开了些原本紧闭的双眼,看着迎面渐渐清晰的轮廓。

Brian(艰难地扯动带着血迹的嘴角,倔强地露出一抹疲惫却散发着颓废的性感微笑,态度依旧玩世不恭):so who fucking are you?!...Mr.Asshole?or someone else?

TO BE CONTINUED...


PS:设计Brian受折磨真的很心疼啊!!!:s37 为了剧情,大家不要怪我!小J不要怪我!
1

评分人数

  • cora

life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

TOP

沙发

是Henry Moore死在酒吧外了吧,
BRIAN难道成了嫌犯?

TOP

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-20 21:05 编辑

backstreet corner


scene:Justin's apartment   9:00 P.M.

Brian用钥匙自己开了门,放下公事包,一边脱着Prada本季新款褐色外套,一边看向沙发上好似睡得很沉的Justin:架着银框眼镜,两手交叠放在胸前搂着一本半开的画册,依旧炫目的金色发丝似乎又长了些,尽显优雅的艺术家气质,柔和的面庞总是平静得像个天真的孩子。
这一秒,Brian心头猛地震颤了一下,某种莫名的温柔情绪迅速蔓延开来,如一缕和煦的阳光般照进了他原本灰暗的心房,无意识地,Brian扬起了一个满含深意的温柔微笑。

Brian(走向Justin,含笑轻声自语):congratulations,my sunshine...you are becoming a real housekeeper of my heart.
Brian微微俯身,凝睇穿着略显宽大的Nike休闲衫气息平缓的Jusitn,恶作剧地伸出了“魔爪”,袭上Justin的胯间。
Justin(睡梦中,皱着眉头,隐忍着):...um...no...
Brian(乐在其中地凑近Jusitn耳边,低声呢喃):it's time to go to school,sunny boy~
Jusitn(突然紧闭双眼,发狂似的挥舞着双手,大声咒骂):...no...go away! you're a son of bitch! don't touch me!
Brian一惊,奋力抓住Justin的手,拉起慌乱中的Justin,从身后把他困在怀里,安慰着受惊的小兽。
Brian(大声地试图唤醒Justin):hey! hey!open your eyes!that's a dream,don't be afraid!Justin.
Justin(突然惊叫一声,睁开了眼):no——!
Justin喘着粗气,眼中布满惊恐,手无意识地狠狠掐着Brian的手臂。
Brian(吻了一下Justin的额角):all right...calm down,...it's ok,it's ok.
Justin暂时从梦魇中解脱出来,感受到来自Brian的体温,慌乱的心稍稍安定几分,似乎是想让对方放心,他回过头,用因紧张而汗湿的手摸了摸Brian的脸颊,凑上去吻住他,久久不愿离去......
a few minutes later...
Justin(冷静下来,微微抬起头,看着Brian,用夹带着不可思议的惊讶和一丝确实的担忧的语调):Mac told me a bad news this morning——
... ...


scene:Sunny Bar   10:40 P.M.

舞池里人头涌动,人们跟着DJ煽动的话语,伴随震耳欲聋的mix舞曲,挑战着一波又一波的热力,忘情地摆动。bar台前Henry Moore一杯本店招牌烈性cocktail下肚,喉间一阵微凉,胃里却顷刻燃烧起来,他却不甚在意地又点了一杯。
一个身型清瘦,中等身高,面容苍白,打扮多少有些奇怪的男人走过来,拍拍Henry Moore的肩。

Moore(回头,打量着眼前这个陌生人,有些嘲弄却不失风度地):hi~
strange man(有些局促,紧张地有些语无伦次):hi...um...actually I know who you are.Mr.Moore
Moore(又一杯烈酒下肚,好笑地竟然有这么不起眼的猎物主动上门搭讪,决定逗弄一下自不量力的家伙):aha?so who are you?

strange man似乎对于对方主动打听自己感到一阵错愕,不过很快又恢复了起初的手足无措。

strange man(给了Moore一个缺乏自信的眼神,透露出他的紧张与不安,伸出右手):I am Dylan Cooper...I...uh...I am...I have been working under you for four years.Mr.Moore
Moore(昏暗的灯光下,眼底透露出明显的鄙夷,忽略了对方伸过来的手,却举起手招呼bartender):aha~nice to meet you,Mr——?
strange man(尴尬地收回手,提醒到):Cooper...Dylan Cooper.
Moore(不在意的耸耸肩,有点厌烦地):yeah,Cooper...I am waiting for somebody now,so——why wouldn't you join them to the dance floor and show your hot?
Dylan Cooper对于如此明显的奚落,愤怒地两只手在身侧紧紧攥着,指尖已经发白,脸上却一反开始的慌张,异常冷静。
Cooper(紧盯着目光始终不在自己身上的Moore,瞬间眼中闪过一丝冷酷,口气却谦恭地):yeah,but it's late...I think I gotta go home.Have a good time,Mr. Moore
意外的骚扰被摆脱之后,Dylan看了看手上价值不菲的Rolex金表.
Moore(与又递过一杯酒的bartender闲聊,打趣刚走的Cooper): poor guy
bartender笑而不语,职业地应承着客人的闲话,手里没有停下调酒的工作。
... ...
scene:Sunny Bar   11:00 P.M.

Brian(一身黑色无袖劲装,在Moore身边坐下):hey!
Moore(闻声一转身,看见异常性感的Brian,眼底的激赏不言而喻,清了清喉咙,故作镇定地):some drink? it's on me.
Brian(毫不客气地):I like generous guys(自顾地招呼bartender)hey!tequila(龙舌兰酒)~take two.
Moore(突然欺身上前,一手扶着Brian的腿,一手抓着他的胳膊,浅笑着):so——what time shall we start our ——communication?Brian
Brian(稍稍惊讶,喝了一口酒,不动声色地轻松问到):Brian?
Moore(并不惊讶,调侃着):absolutely you forgot me...(自嘲地笑笑,看着Brian,平静地陈述着)just a crazy night long time ago.so——forget  it.  ...you are Brian Kinney,the hotest queer of the liberal Avenue.
Brian(听着对方的话,心里思考着可信性和对方的目的,嘴上却很“Brian”地自如应对着):you are honest and... if you don't mind it,I will want to ask you some questions,such as——
Moore(突然急迫地打断Brian接下来的问话):——let's finish what we should do as soon as possible.
Brian(挑挑眉,毫不在乎地,心里却警觉了几分):aha~but——I think you would like to handle a contract first,right?
Moore(拉起Brian往外走,淫邪地笑着):ok,but I prefer to do it outside,such as a backstreet corner.
Brian(佯装戏谑地):hoo~man~you have a strange hobby.
... ...


scene:the crime scene investigation lab   
       in Mac's office      3:15  A.M.

Mac picked up a phone.

Mac(因连续熬夜而略显疲惫的声音):Taylor.
phone(Flack's voice):I'm sorry to disturb you at this time,Mac.but... a man was found dead at a backstreet corner outside the Sunny Bar.
... ...


TO BE CONTINUED...


PS:Tequila——龙舌兰酒
1

评分人数

  • cora

life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

TOP

网站今天抽了,回复发不上啊:s31

BJ看似平静温馨的生活后面真是暗潮汹涌啊
B的商战与小J所面临的危险应该会有交集的吧?

继续期待后续,LZ加油!

TOP

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-15 15:56 编辑

I smell a trap

scene:  in a Starbucks coffee shop on third Avenue and 92nd Street junction , Manhattan,N.Y.  10:35A.M.

Brian纯白衬衣+深蓝色Armani西装,黑色Gucci真丝领带,坐在靠窗的位置,一边酌着那杯没什么风味的拿铁,一边看着外面匆忙往来的人们,思忖着待会儿怎么应付PBNA(百事可乐北美公司)市场部的头头Henry Moore.

strange man(走过来,扫了一眼Brian):excuse me? Mr.Kinney?
Brian(转过脸,微微抬头看着来人):yeah.
strange man(眼前一亮,伸出手):Henry Moore.
Brian(立即起身,伸出手,与对方简单地握了握,公事化口吻):nice to meet you,Mr. Moore.
Henry Moore(礼貌地寒暄):nice to meet you    sorry ,i am late.
Brian(无所谓地耸耸肩):somebody would not be?so never mind it...and then——(深吸一口气,露出极具杀伤力的迷人微笑,看着Morre)may I start  my presentation?
Henry Morre(盯着Brian,一阵出神):...
Brian(眯着眼,看着目光呆滞的Morre,稍微提高了声音):...Mr. Moore?are you ok?
Henry Morre(一个激灵,睁了睁眼,终于回神,看向Brian,机敏地解释刚才的失态):yes. just a little tired... the nights of N.Y. have been attracting  me always...(不羁地撇撇嘴)so——
Brian(喝了一口咖啡,含蓄地笑笑,想起昨晚与Jusitn在bar度过的狂乱夜晚,听不出是戏谑还是认真的):aha~i think so.
Henry Morre(透过优雅的无框眼镜,不动声色却专注地观察面前的男人,微微扯动嘴角,露出了一个极难被察觉的诡异笑容,心里默默地):I know you know it,Brian.
... ...


scene:Justin's apartment   10:05 A.M.
when Jusitn slept in the bed,suddenly his cellphone rang noisily.
a few seconds later...
Justin(闭着眼,伸出手,摸索着床头柜上的手机,无力地):um...
Mac(一贯平静的口吻):hey Jusitn.
Jusitn(半梦半醒中辨认出了Uncle Mac的声音,顿时清醒了一些,宿醉的眩晕和因昨夜与Brian疯狂做爱而透支的身体让他呲牙咧嘴,一手撑着额头,轻声咒骂):oh,shit!
Mac(听不到对方的回话):Justin?can you hear me?
Justin(顾不得身体的不适,答话):yeah,yeah,Uncle Mac.what's wrong?
Mac(沉默了一会儿,极为谨慎地开口):...look kid,I know something about you.maybe you didn't know what i knew it.
Justin(大脑仍处于半休眠,疑惑地):yeah...so——?what's that?
Mac(思考了一下):that is—— you are gay.
Justin(愣住,一时无语):...
Mac(像个父亲般地):I want you to understand that whatever I just hope you will be alive and happy at any time.
Justin(温柔地笑笑,坚定地回答):thank you uncle Mac,I will.
Mac(紧接着话锋一转,以职业的态度叙述):and by the way...I'm afraid that I'm bringing you a bad news.
Justin(更加迷惑):a bad news?about me?
Mac(为避免给Justin造成太大冲击,尽量冷静地说):you and any other gay people may be in danger——now.
... ...



scene:N.Y. department of Kinnetik
       in Brian's office     1:20 P.M.

Brian was having a  call.
thelephone(Henry Moore's voice):Mr.kinney,would you like to discuss some details on your presentation... with me...in the evening?
Brian(坐在老板椅上,有点意外,怔了一下,随即用一种种轻松中略带傲慢,充满暗示的语调):certaninly.but the point is if you realized its meaning...and ...I need to know what I will get after our...communication.Mr. Morre
telephone(暧昧夹带些许赞赏):are you always so directly like this?
Brian(更直接):I think so,especially  on my business.
telephone(带着明显地引诱,许诺着):Pepsi-Cola North American advertising agent.what's your opinion?
Brian(吹着口哨,似乎甚是满意):deal!Sunny bar ,eleven P.M.
telephone(爽快地):ok,see you then——.
Brian(挂上电话,嘴角保持着自负的微笑,若有所思,目光渐渐变冷。点上一根雪茄,吸了几口并顽皮地吐出一个清晰的烟圈,猛地向后一趟,闭上眼,轻佻地自言自语,幽幽开口):...my dick often tells me if a reality is too good to be true it will be a lie.  ...(阴阳怪气,一副无畏地调侃)I smell a trap...


TO BE CONTINED...
1

评分人数

  • cora

life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

TOP

謝謝樓主的弟享!

小J挺可愛的!

TOP

坐沙发~~~恭喜考试高分通过 :)

TOP

  • 三国群英传私服
  •